Pattern: Compare/Contrast 1

Compare/contrast paragraphs are usually organized in one of two ways. One way is to make the comparison point by point throughout the paragraph. The student writer of this paragraph looks at one element from both perspectives, such as the writer's first point discussing how easy the machines are to use. The color-coding of this paragraph makes it easy to see how the writer compares and contrasts the typewriter and the computer point by point.

Sample Paragraph

The Macintosh computer that I use at school is dramatically different from the family typewriter that I use at home. First of all, the computer with its word processing program is easy to use. On the screen in front of me, I can see an entire rough draft of a paragraph as I'm working on it. When I'm using the typewriter, in contrast, all that I have to look at is a rough draft that's on a sheet of paper next to the typewriter. I have to keep looking back and forth between that and the draft I'm typing out. Second the computer is quick. In a moment or two, I can easily delete or add sentences to the paragraph. I can move a sentence from one part of the paragraph to the next, and I can make corrections in spelling or wording with a few key strokes. But with the typewriter, there is no quick way to make a correction, delete a sentence, add a sentence, or move a sentence around. Every time I want to make a change, I have to use an eraser or correction fluid, or I have to type a new draft. Finally the computer offers helpful options. At any point, I can give it a command to check my spelling. I can ask it to count the number of words in my paper. I can change my margins and number the pages. The typewriter, on the other hand, does not offer a single one of these helpful options. With the computer, I feel I'm on the cutting edge of technology; with the typewriter, I feel I'm back in the Stone Age.

 


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