A run-on sentence, a common mistake of writers, occurs when you put two ideas together with no punctuation between them or only a comma. Here's a run-on example:
In this example, the first part, "A car can also show your personality," is a complete idea. The second idea begins with "You show," which expresses a new subject and a new verb.
Every run-on sentence calls for its own correction. Most of the time, you will add punctuation and a connecting word. Sometimes, though, you would do better if you rewrote the sentence to make a shorter sentence with only one main idea. Below are some standard methods for correcting run-ons. As you apply these concepts, be sure to check to see if both ideas are complete ideas, also known as independent clauses. Does each idea have its own subject and complete verb? Can each idea stand alone as a sentence? For more help, try the handout on dependent and independent clauses.
A car can also show your personality. You show you're economical.
A car can also show your personality, thrifty or extravagant.
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A car can say something about you; it can say you're economical.
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